i my self am a metal head, while this was good i have to say that the distortion was a litle much at the beginning, made it sound fuzzy, but overall pretty good.
you should layer it a little it better... other than that cool...
I love the underlying beat, which program did you use to create this?
rytmik retrobits,you can get it on the DsiWare
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